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Saturday, 15 November 2008

Pinch Hitter: Baseball Fantasy Becomes Reality

Reviewed by Stuart Nachbar


Pinch Hitter
Pinch Hitter
I love baseball, so I jumped at the opportunity to review a fictional story based around the great American game. Dean Whitney’s Pinch Hitter is a slightly different story than I’m used to reading. It revolves around David Robbins, a 45 year old electronics salesman who is discovered by a major league manager when he fills in for a friend in an amateur game. He demonstrates not only an ability to hit, but also a keen batting eye, equally important for success in the major leagues. David impresses the manager in the stands so much that he is invited to batting practice with the major league team, and then he is offered a contract for the final six weeks of the season.

But David also has a secret that is a driver to the story. His older brother Danny was also a baseball protégé. Unlike David, Danny is an over-confident pitcher with quality stuff, good enough for a scholarship or a major league contract. However, Danny’s promise ends when he is hit above the eye by a line drive—off the bat of his younger brother. Immediately after that fatal incident, David ends his own baseball dreams, and years later, Danny disappears from his life, crippled by lingering pain and lost dreams. At the start of this story David has not seen his older brother for nine years.

Pinch Hitter is a moving story and I could see that Whitney spent a lot of time around a major league baseball team. The clubhouse and front office scenes are more detailed than I would expect to find from an author with no personal day-to-day connection to major league baseball, and Whitney also shows a strong knowledge of the situational game, where managers have to strategize again each other, using mind and matter to win. It’s no surprise that his main character is a pinch hitter, since that is a situational position in a game, as opposed to an everyday star. Reading Pinch Hitter, I was reminded of Rudy, the Notre Dame football movie, where a 26 year old college senior has overcome dyslexia to earn a degree and have a chance to play for a national championship team. Rudy is carried off the field at the end of his only game, just as David is heralded by his teammates at the end of this story.

 

Pinch Hitter is moving, but it has flaws. David is too affable and likeable a character. He is every one’s best teammate and friend, a broadcaster’s dream interview and the best husband and father. Only a relief pitcher on an opposing team hates him, and David gets his redemption against the man near the end of the story. The manager and batting coach are too fair and too nice, and so is the team’s chief executive. This made for dialogue that was not very natural. There are too few questions, public or private, as to why a major league team would sign a 45 year old who had not played in decades to a big league contract.  There could have been more skepticism to make the story more believable, expressed by opposing players, managers and media, but not opposing fans. I doubt most fans would know about an opposing team’s pinch hitting specialist, unless he’s a veteran on the tail end of a long career.

In conclusion, Pinch Hitter is a decent read for a serious baseball fan who might have gone to a fantasy camp or two, and still has his dreams of stepping up to the plate against a major league fastball. But it could have been a better story with a little more spice.

Contact Stuart Nachbar at http://www.EducatedQuest.com , a blog on education politics, policy and technology or read about his first book, The Sex Ed Chronicle, a novel on education and politics in 1980 New Jersey, at http://www.SexEdChronicles.com .
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