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| Saturday, 15 November 2008 | |
Pinch Hitter: Baseball Fantasy Becomes RealityReviewed by Stuart Nachbar ![]() Pinch Hitter But David also has a secret that is a driver to the story. His older brother Danny was also a baseball protégé. Unlike David, Danny is an over-confident pitcher with quality stuff, good enough for a scholarship or a major league contract. However, Danny’s promise ends when he is hit above the eye by a line drive—off the bat of his younger brother. Immediately after that fatal incident, David ends his own baseball dreams, and years later, Danny disappears from his life, crippled by lingering pain and lost dreams. At the start of this story David has not seen his older brother for nine years. Pinch Hitter is moving, but it has flaws. David is too affable and likeable a character. He is every one’s best teammate and friend, a broadcaster’s dream interview and the best husband and father. Only a relief pitcher on an opposing team hates him, and David gets his redemption against the man near the end of the story. The manager and batting coach are too fair and too nice, and so is the team’s chief executive. This made for dialogue that was not very natural. There are too few questions, public or private, as to why a major league team would sign a 45 year old who had not played in decades to a big league contract. There could have been more skepticism to make the story more believable, expressed by opposing players, managers and media, but not opposing fans. I doubt most fans would know about an opposing team’s pinch hitting specialist, unless he’s a veteran on the tail end of a long career. In conclusion, Pinch Hitter is a decent read for a serious baseball fan who might have gone to a fantasy camp or two, and still has his dreams of stepping up to the plate against a major league fastball. But it could have been a better story with a little more spice. Contact Stuart Nachbar at http://www.EducatedQuest.com , a blog on education politics, policy and technology or read about his first book, The Sex Ed Chronicle, a novel on education and politics in 1980 New Jersey, at http://www.SexEdChronicles.com . |
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